Tuesday, July 17, 2012

Olympic Torch





The Olympic torch sure is special. One of our writing choices is to imagine you are chosen to carry the Olympic flame! Describe your feelings as you run... ...carrying the Olympic torch.

Today we tried a quick Draw - Label - Caption plan to develop ideas, details and sequencing for our writing. We will use these to create effective sentences which are grouped into paragraphs.

Check out these examples from year fives in our class:

Rhys

Sam

Zeb
Alexandra

Bianca

Daniel

Kharn

5 comments:

  1. Wow these quick drawings are magnificent.
    I can't wait for the 2012 OLYMPIC GAMES start it will be so cool to watch our NZ team win a gold medal right the way through the GAMES.
    WELL DONE ROOM 20 STUDENTS:)

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  2. Spectacular drawings!
    Olympics are nearly here(yay!)
    I like the videos too Mr.M. Well done everyone!:)

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  3. I love all the cool work that everyone done.
    I also like the videos they are really cool my favourite one is the bottom one.

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  4. I love the drawing's there awesome.

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