The 5 senses |
Quickly, I carried the bike forward and rammed my left leg up against the gates. I called Nicky's name and she ran towards me. In a brief panic, she transferred the electronic bracelet to my ankle. I would find out later that Nicky attached my leg to the metal post at first and that my hairy ankle had almost made her vomit!
With urgency, I ran my bike towards the marshals and got on my seat as soon as I could. My legs eased into the rotations as I breathed in the sea air. Faint smells of barbecue dissipated into the distance. My bike cut through the bumpy road, propelled by those racing wheels Stephen had added and my newly discovered enjoyment of the race. I was free. Completely alive in the moment.
With urgency, I ran my bike towards the marshals and got on my seat as soon as I could. My legs eased into the rotations as I breathed in the sea air. Faint smells of barbecue dissipated into the distance. My bike cut through the bumpy road, propelled by those racing wheels Stephen had added and my newly discovered enjoyment of the race. I was free. Completely alive in the moment.
The Parkvale crew. Where's Nicky? |
Lycra for one of your birthdays Mr Moriarty?
ReplyDeleteMmm, hairy ankles.
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like you had an amazing time at your race and really enjoyed
ReplyDeletewell done teachers hope you did really well hope you had a great time
ReplyDeleteI hope you did well mr Wright might of had a hard time being the kayaker.
ReplyDeleteGreat detail Mr Moriarty. It was a great race! Shame that green cap didn't appear out of the water sooner!
ReplyDeleteIt was a great day of pushing ourselves to the limit and doing our personal best! I love your recount Mr Moriarty, especially the anticipation I could sense through your choice of words. I nearly vomited because I had run my hardest not because of your hairy ankles.
ReplyDeleteI'm back in the moment when I read your version of the race. So true Mr M, the waiting and anticipation of getting going was the adrenalin moment. Well written, must start training for next year!!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed riding next to you Mr M! Your writing explains how many of us felt while waiting nervously at the transition area. The staff should be very proud of their modelling of Parkvale Pride.
ReplyDeleteI hope all the teacher did wale from nasa
ReplyDeleteThat is a outstanding photo its all the teachers in Parkvale school thank you for sharing
ReplyDeleteWOW teachers amazing parkvale PRIDE
ReplyDeleteBrilliant, authentic, colourful and inspirational writing Mr Moriarty. Top effort!!
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