We love Storybird! These Storybird stories were created by students at home or during independent time as part of our literacy rotation. Enjoy and comments would be very much appreciated!
Professor GumballThe Curse of the Blue TrampolinePart 1 on Storybird by Stefan.
Feelings we can all relate to on Storybird by Eden.
Tigers lands. on Storybird by Amy.
Adventures of Azurre and Lillian. on Storybird by Kharn.
A brave dog's adventure... on Storybird by Teva.
Proffeser Gumball.The Mystery of the ice man. on Storybird by Brody.
The brave spartan who fought the romans on Storybird by Seth.
Friends. on Storybird by Samuel.
Those story are so good and well thought out.
ReplyDeleteI love everybody's story bird.
Yes I agree, Amy.
DeleteYou all put a lot of thought into your stories and they show personality.
Wow this is great guys, they are really interesting my favourite one is Eden's it is really well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Flossie i'm gonna do a never one but for little kids about a magician
DeleteGreat everyone I think Kharns one is the best. Because I think it would if taken a long time and it is well thought out. And it is a real cool story I wanted to read on.
ReplyDeleteawesome story birds
ReplyDeleteGreat job Eden. I can relate to all of those things. I thought the illustrations were perfect for the things that you talked about. Can you relate to any of those things?
ReplyDeleteHi Josh
DeleteThanks for the comment I can relate to all those feelings
heres a link to my blog
http://prideeden.blogspot.co.nz/
Dear Stefan,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on story-birds! I only got to see the first Professor Gumball but it was fabulous! I really wish I could have seen the first part but the second part was great!
What had happened in the first part?
Hello Eden,
ReplyDeleteI loved your story birds very good.
i am just a little confused from some spelling errors but that's all. Overall great stuff :) Are you going to write more?
Hi makenna
DeleteThank you very much
yea i'm working on one now it has a bet of a twist its about a magician
Hi Seth! Great story, especially when you said that there leader, lived to have not a sad ending. Also how did you come up with such a great story?
ReplyDelete-Amber from Colorado-
Hi i loved all the pictures and the way you built it all together . What will happen tomorrow night?
ReplyDeleteWow Teva! I really enjoyed your story about the lonely dog and its owner. Whenever we go anywhere, Rascal always at the door and wines. Also your pictures on your post were spectacular. I defiantly enjoyed your story. Was the dog a boy are a girl?
ReplyDeleteHi,Kaela, Thank you for your feedback, and rascal sounds like a nice dog, and the boy was a girl.
DeleteDear Samuel,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story. It seemed like you put a lot of thought and time into it! Did they meet other friends or was it just them forever?
-Tori
Thanks Tori, They were friends forever.
DeleteIt was just them.
DeleteHi Seth! Great story I really liked at the end when you said that the leader lived to have not such a sad story. By the way how did you come up with such a great story?
ReplyDelete-Amber-
Dear Stefan,
ReplyDeleteI really like the story you made, and I think it was really entertaining. I read it all and thought,"That evil magician is really mean!" And that's a under statment!
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Aidan from Colorado
I love Eddie's story about 'Feelings We Can All Relate To". I could relate to every question you wrote in your story. Very well thought out - really makes the reader think about their own lives in a meaningful way. Well done Eddie. You are a real author.
ReplyDeleteMs Johnson - Frimley School, Hastings
Thank you so very much Ms Johnson
DeleteIs was actually quite hard here is a link to may blog if you want to have a look at my writing or what I've been learning http://prideeden.blogspot.co.nz/
from Eden parkvale school