Thursday, April 26, 2012

Storybirds Part 2

We love Storybird! These Storybird stories were created by students at home or during independent time as part of our literacy rotation. Enjoy and comments would be very much appreciated!

Professor GumballThe Curse of the Blue TrampolinePart 1 on Storybird by Stefan.
Feelings we can all relate to on Storybird by Eden. Tigers lands. on Storybird by Amy. Adventures of Azurre and Lillian. on Storybird  by Kharn. A brave dog's adventure... on Storybird by Teva.
Proffeser Gumball.The Mystery of the ice man. on Storybird by Brody. The brave spartan who fought the romans on Storybird by Seth. Friends. on Storybird by Samuel.

22 comments:

  1. Those story are so good and well thought out.
    I love everybody's story bird.

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    1. Yes I agree, Amy.

      You all put a lot of thought into your stories and they show personality.

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  2. Wow this is great guys, they are really interesting my favourite one is Eden's it is really well done.

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    1. Thanks Flossie i'm gonna do a never one but for little kids about a magician

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  3. Great everyone I think Kharns one is the best. Because I think it would if taken a long time and it is well thought out. And it is a real cool story I wanted to read on.

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  4. Great job Eden. I can relate to all of those things. I thought the illustrations were perfect for the things that you talked about. Can you relate to any of those things?

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    1. Hi Josh
      Thanks for the comment I can relate to all those feelings
      heres a link to my blog
      http://prideeden.blogspot.co.nz/

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  5. Dear Stefan,

    Great job on story-birds! I only got to see the first Professor Gumball but it was fabulous! I really wish I could have seen the first part but the second part was great!

    What had happened in the first part?

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  6. Hello Eden,

    I loved your story birds very good.

    i am just a little confused from some spelling errors but that's all. Overall great stuff :) Are you going to write more?

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    1. Hi makenna
      Thank you very much
      yea i'm working on one now it has a bet of a twist its about a magician

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  7. Hi Seth! Great story, especially when you said that there leader, lived to have not a sad ending. Also how did you come up with such a great story?
    -Amber from Colorado-

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  8. Hi i loved all the pictures and the way you built it all together . What will happen tomorrow night?

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  9. Wow Teva! I really enjoyed your story about the lonely dog and its owner. Whenever we go anywhere, Rascal always at the door and wines. Also your pictures on your post were spectacular. I defiantly enjoyed your story. Was the dog a boy are a girl?

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    1. Hi,Kaela, Thank you for your feedback, and rascal sounds like a nice dog, and the boy was a girl.

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  10. Dear Samuel,
    I really enjoyed your story. It seemed like you put a lot of thought and time into it! Did they meet other friends or was it just them forever?
    -Tori

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    1. Thanks Tori, They were friends forever.

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  11. Hi Seth! Great story I really liked at the end when you said that the leader lived to have not such a sad story. By the way how did you come up with such a great story?
    -Amber-

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  12. Dear Stefan,
    I really like the story you made, and I think it was really entertaining. I read it all and thought,"That evil magician is really mean!" And that's a under statment!
    From,
    Aidan from Colorado

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  13. I love Eddie's story about 'Feelings We Can All Relate To". I could relate to every question you wrote in your story. Very well thought out - really makes the reader think about their own lives in a meaningful way. Well done Eddie. You are a real author.
    Ms Johnson - Frimley School, Hastings

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    1. Thank you so very much Ms Johnson
      Is was actually quite hard here is a link to may blog if you want to have a look at my writing or what I've been learning http://prideeden.blogspot.co.nz/
      from Eden parkvale school

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