Writing Purpose: To Entertain
WALT use our senses to describe
- (see, hear, smell, feel, taste)
- different sentence starters
- some short sentences
Swoosh! I can feel the Coke going up my nose. Jaidyn Russell,
Brayden: Boom! I opened the coke lid, Squirt!, The coke shot right up my nostrils like someone shot a shotgun up my nostrils.
“Pop! Boom! Ouch!” as the coke shot up my nostrils. Tracey L
OH Coke. I ran to it, he undid the lid and the fizzy coke rocketed out of the bottle up into my nostril.
Ka pow! A gush of coke sprayed into my face! I peeped a look. Splash! Coke went into my eye. “Yeow!” I shouted leaping up, dancing around the room holding my eye!
George Boom the bottle explodes! It looks like whiskers.
Rosie: Boom! It felt like I had fizzy whiskers. Then it felt like I had fizzy boogers.
TRAYLAN Pop! pop! oh no is going to pop!
Jacob BOOM!! The fizzing coke went right up John’s nose.
Crystal = BOOM! Suddenly I can feel the fizzy spraying up my nose.
Shake! Shake! Shake! Pop! The coke lid flew away and the coke went straight up my nose and everywhere else it looked like cat whiskers. (TAYLOR)
It burst on my face like cat whiskers.
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JAMES ¬ BOOM!! AGH! The coke fires up at me like a volcano.
Kellyanne: I could taste the fizzed coke in my mouth and I could smell the coke fizzing bubbles.
Boom! The coke give me a big mustache. Liam
Boom!!!! I could see a coke bottle on the table in front of me then suddenly coke burst out like a firework. By Brooklyn
Kyra I opened the lid and out it sprayed up my nostrils, and then came out like fireworks.
Maia: Not only would it be a coke rocket, it would be a rocket to space!
I smell coke burning through my nostrils at 102 kilometres an hour. Ben!
NASA: Come on I can do the IMPOSSIBLE.
Jared: It shot up like a rocket.
KAPOW! Suddenly coke exploded all over my face and the place. BY JULIUS MONKEY
Cameron: I unscrewed the lid of the coke bottle. The coke shot out of the bottle.
Imagine if a coke bottle blew up in front of you. Boom! Fizz! (Zach)
As he opened the coke bottle suddenly POP! He went back as he got fright from the lid flying across the room. (Kayla)
I could pull it off still unknowing that it was going to go everywhere. Then it exploded in my face. Yum, but it still hurt.(Madison)